Yeah, this bill is over broad, overreach, and will likely be challenged on those grounds if it ever reaches the floor.
I am not too worried though. Because I know of a lot of ridiculous bills that are proposed, written up, and sponsored, SOLELY to make a political statement of being "strong on ___". Even the authors and sponsors know it won't pass. They just want to be seen making bold gestures.
And then there are the many similar laws on the books that would equally appear to be Orwellian to the layperson. But in practice, they only apply narrowly. But it takes a lawyer to see it sometimes.
This bill for example... With it's references to VPN. Sounds similar to current federal regulations regarding interstate travel. A crime conducted over state lines is a whole bigger deal, and adds an additional set of crimes. But panicked readers who don't read a lot of criminal code legalese, might take away from the raw text, that it might criminalize any and all interstate travel.